Creating Character Conflicts

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Writers know that creating interesting characters is an important part of writing fiction. Adding some conflict, however, creates fireworks and can change an okay story into a great one.
oppositesLet’s explore a few aspects. Is it true that opposites attract? Do people who are not suited to each other find themselves drawn together inexplicably? In romance novels, they make the best matches, but do they really? It’s not really known for sure, but in fiction, opposites can definitely create some of those aforementioned fireworks.

Opposites create friction, and friction, as writers know, gives power to the story by creating tension. Tension is what creates that exquisite tug that makes the reader want to keep reading. Relationships are important in real life and must carry the same influence in a story. Even the lone-eagle character who doesn’t think he needs any help at all must accept help from other characters to propel the plot forward. These are the building blocks for creating conflict.

 

When Conflict Is a Good Thing
In a novel, conflict is necessary. Love and lust have given many stories the lifeblood it needs. Anticipation is what draws a reader to your story and keeps him reading. Competition gives it action and excitement. Whether it’s a healthy manifestation of need or desire, an unhealthy obsession, or a power struggle, this is what interests the reader.
When you are creating your characters, take some extra time and develop their competitive personality traits. The resulting conflict will quicken the pace, build tension, and make your book a page-turner.
The Foil
A good way to put the power of opposites to work for you is to use a foil. A foil is a character super hero.1who acts the opposite of the hero. The foil contrasts the main character to highlight one of their attributes and emphasize their traits. This does not always mean the antagonist. For example, if the hero demands action, the foil advises him to be cautious. The use of a foil gives a scene tension by highlighting the main character’s traits through the use of contrast.

Examples of Foils:
sherlockIn the Sherlock Holmes series by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, John H. Watson is Sherlock’s assistant and friend. Where Sherlock is almost unnaturally intelligent, Watson’s intelligence is a little lower (though he’s not stupid). Sherlock is detached and reserved, while Watson is kind and humane. Watson needs earthly cares, while Holmes can go for days without eating or sleeping.
In the Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling, Albus Dumbledore is representative of all that is good. Lord Voldemort is the epitome of evil. Dumbledore was the only person that Voldemort ever feared and did everything he could to destroy him, while Dumbledore only wanted to help Tom Riddle (who later became Voldemort.) Dumbledore believes that good and love are universal solvents, while Voldemort considers love to be foolish and embraces evil.
The Wind in the Willows by Kenneth Grahame features Mr. Toad who is kind, good-natured, and wealthy. His foil is Mr. Badger who is extremely unsocial and hermit-like.
windmill In Don Quixote by Miguel Cervantes, the eponymous hero has a very fanciful outlook on life. His foil, Sancho Panza, is more practical and down to earth. Physically, Sancho is also described as rotund and short, while Don Quixote is tall and thin.
All of these characters serve to illustrate each others’ strengths and weaknesses. Some of the conflicts are small and subtle (Sherlock and Watson) while others are huge and in your face (Dumbledore and Voldemort).
How and When To Use Character Conflicts
Dissecting each character’s personality traits will give you some great fodder for writing conflicts. The obvious way to do that is to put your characters in the ring together to fight their flaws out (laid back vs. high strung, controlling vs. submissive, happy vs. sad/angry etc.), but your readers may be anticipating that. Not all positive character traits complement each other, so neither do their flaws.
Here’s an example: Peter is a college professor. He’s very kind, intelligent, and understanding but is quick to temper. Imagine a student stays after class and demands that Peter regrade his test due to a low score. The student feels like he should have done better and is very pushy about it. The normally easy-going Peter, when confronted with an angry student, loses his temper very quickly. He refuses and calls the student a bad name. The student files a report and the professor faces legal action/job loss/reprimand, etc.
Here we have a self-centered and privileged character who faces off against an off-the-cuff reaction of a normally dignified character. The conflicts slam together with an explosion of flaw vs. flaw. You can clash any opposing character traits this way. An uptight personality type will clash with and uninhibited one, and extrovert will clash with an introvert, a character who is too generous will clash with a more frugal one.

 

fireworksMake your conflicting personalities rub against each other and create some friction. Maximize the explosion when they come together. If everyone in your story plays nice and believes that it all will work out in the end, it’s going to be a mighty boring story. Unless of course you’re writing for 3 year olds. In that case, good job. Plan your characters out, match their clashing traits and, go ahead, create fireworks. Your readers will thank you.

 

Writing a Character Sketch

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Are you stuck on character development? Do you need ideas for an essay or research paper on a certain person? One way to get unstuck is to write a character sketch. Character sketches can be used for prewriting to organize your characters or for a collection of character sheets to use when looking for ideas.

The purpose of writing a character sketch is to introduce your readers to someone, fictional or real. The idea is for your readers to leave with a strong mental image of that person, know how they talk, know their characteristics, to know something of them personally. A character sketch is a snapshot of your chosen person, not their complete history.

Look for the qualities of character and personality traits that you see in your chosen person. Tell your readers something about that person. Introduce them. One good way to do this is to tell a little story about an encounter you may have had with him or her. Describe the location where the encounter took place; ideally, this would be somewhere that belongs to that person. Focus on the things in the scene that represent your person. Don’t just tell the story as it happened; also describe their facial expressions and gestures. How are they dressed? What words do they say? Use direct quotations to flesh out your character.

Be sure to include details such as:

  • Physical features. What color is their hair? What color are their eyes? What is their height? How much do they weigh? How do they dress? Do they smile? Look serious?
  • What is your character’s personality? Are they funny, serious, quiet, etc.?
  • What do they like or dislike? What you know about their preferences? Why do you know this?
  • Who is their family? Who are their siblings? Who are their parents? What is their family history?
  • What are their  beliefs? What are their hobbies?
  • What do you like or dislike about your person?
  • Why are you drawn to them? Why did you choose to write about them?

Be sure to use strong visual words to provide a long-lasting mental image of your person or character. Use quality adjectives and words that evoke the five senses. Try to elicit an emotional response from your reader. This will allow them to connect with you and your character, but it will also show how you were feeling when you were writing your piece or while spending time with that person.

This is a great way to assess characters in literature that you’re reading about, researching, or writing about. This is a tool of observation to look at the many facets of your chosen person. It could also help show weak areas that could use some improvement. Use it liberally and often or maybe just for fun!

 

Bonus! Writing Exercise:

How would you like some revenge? Write a character sketch on your least favorite teacher or professor, exposing their flaws.

 

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